Fred and Larry Get Cancer part I

So i gave the first 45 pages to Chuck today. I think its going okay, I am my own worst critic so who knows. Some surprising things happened while I was writing it. One, Fred became kinda a wuss. At first he was a tool, but then he just became a pussy over time. Larry got meaner too. I like it, he's an asshole now, but I am going to let him get calmer as the story goes on. I love Abe who is a new character I created for the script, along with Memphis of course. Its going to be longer than I thought, but that's okay, my original plan was only 90 min, now its going to be 110 min. Not a big difference.  Plus the reclusive gopher is going to be great!!